I'll start by saying that the poetic part was interesting, nice to see some variation from all the pointless stick violence. Even if the actual animation itself is basically the opposite (Or, so it seems) from the message. The music was okay, it was too soft for such a rough and hard stick fight. I'd prefer that you'd use sound effects, it really touches everything up, and makes the animation more interesting. Also, lower the music, if such effects are used. The poetic part and the violent stick fight dont seem to add up, so make sure you keep at one side at a time. I can understand that the animation says "You gotta fight" but it doesnt make any sense, considering that its just 2 sticks fighting.
- I prefer more realistic, and more jumpy style. This looked too smooth, almost as if they "knew" what do do, it looked too soft and light. Violence needs to be harsh, cruel, shaky and jumpy, BUT realistic. So work on that.
Effects were nice, i suppose.
- It was okay, nothing particular,
- Like i said, add sound effects, and use violent music
OR dont add sound effects, keep the animation to the subject, (poetic part) and use fitting music (which you did, but the animation doesnt fit)
Hope that will do! You have potential, style and a very characteristic view on life! With these kind of thoughts, you will reach far! Unfortunately, reality doesnt really speak in such ways, and is cruel and unfair. But i suppose hope will do.
Thanks for the comment and crit I'll try to apply what you said to my next animation.In my eyes the fight is symbolic and is definitely not opposite sorry you couldn't see that .
Wow, i must say, this is fascinating! I cant believe how you got the animation so smooth! And i really enjoyed the sadness in the whole thing! Awesome, indeed!
Nothing negative really, except for the quality, i noticed its an AVI. file, but hey, cant complain, really. Because with that amount of material it would surely lag. Nice, non the less.
WHAT THE F****
What in the name of fuck?! that's the most random thing i've ever seen! Awesome humor though! I had a good laugh.
Since the main point is humor, i wont be very judging on it, but all animations can be improved.
Nice work, nice idea and i'd love to see more! I'll keep an eye out for these!
Nice, but the animation could use a little fix. Also, the story was.... well, kinda confusing, but yeah.
Story: Poop/10 ... just jk, 6/10
THIS IS FUCKING AWESOME!
AEWESOME TXT ANIEMATEION BRO! :D Nice voiecie! And nice point too!
This is.... not good.
Animations are quite bad, its obvious, the movements and the whole animation idea is either made extremly bad in purpose, or the animator cant do better. The art is the same, not good. The story was kind of odd and lame.
didnt really see the point of a man eating serials, then suddenly swallowing a bomb... only to die, while being insulted by a PIRATE, who also dies, and out nowhere, God appears and tells the man he is gay? o_O thats like WTF?
This was honestly quite different. Wow. This was actually nice.
The song really got me, very nice song, i'd say! Some of the animations were awesome, and some not, but overall, this was good. : )
(Swedish review) Fyfan vad nice! :D
Helt jävla otroligt! Asnice! Det här är fan mycket bättre än dina Castle serier (inget illa) men det här visar verkligen din totala talang inom 2D och 3D!
9 / 10 : Animation: Hur bra som helst, lite laggig på vissa ställen, men bra rent generellt.
2Dn och 3Dn var fan hur epic som helst : ) Mycket effekter och sånt, det var nice.
10 / 10: Ljud: Låten var skitbra, jag laddade ner den direkt :D haha
10 / 10: Story / innehåll: Väldigt kul och se båtracing! :D
Allmänt, 9/10 ! Väldigt bra jobbat! Hör av dig lite och ge mig gärna lite kritik så att jag kan bli bättre! Jag registrerade mig på din sida! :)
Well, since you got bored, i SUPPOSE this can be seen as good.
I thought the guy was going to assrape her tbh, lol... (>_>)
xD eitherway, 5/5 for idea lol
This is not really so much as it seems, the point of view and the idea was touching but the animation and the art itself was not.
I'd expect more of this was to be on the frontpage.
Good part: The idea, the story
Animation/Music: Too simple, needs more effort and work.
There you go!
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