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[The way of my madness 2p]

Ehh...

I am sorry, but its not good enough.
heres some issues:

- The character quality is bad.
Needs more work, shadows, light, its just to simple,

- Shooting sounds killed my ears, and the quality wasnt the best.
Song was nice though.

- Animation was choppy, somewhat okay.
The mix of tweens and fbf made it wierd.
Stick to one style.

- You've GOT to work on your english .__.

Final review: 5/10
2/5
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A message to our fellow NG members:

When you are going to review a movie,
dont put a stupid and immature answer like;

'' OH RLY COOL, I LIKE IT 10/10
MAKE MOAR PLZ ''

Explain why you liked it, and dont just put a frikkin stample as fast as you see something cool.

This is the reason why crappy and horrible animations are on the toplists,
when the carefully and good animated movies arent going anywhere.
Because of the major, immature 5-year olds on NG.

And give the author criticism, and what you liked about it.
End, and there you have yourself a good review.

I fucking hate this, and its a big issue.

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I dont care if this review is marked as bad,

This, is one hell of a good review.
Now deal with it.

And please, try to tell others this message.

Hulalaoo responds:

hahaha , you submitions are very bad, xD, poor boy

[Left 4 Speed]

HAHA '' xD God fucking damnit ''

I havent played LFD, but i know about it, and this movie was HILARIOUS! LOL
XD I like the old guy! '' YOU FUCKING RETARD ''

LOL. And the black guy?
I must say, you sure are good with your voice!
Nice job, you're at same level as Egoraptor! XD
Make more, PLZ

And the Wall? '' WTF HAX '' XD I loled so hard

10/10
5/5
10/10

[When the heroes are gone.]

Decent.

But really, the animation was crappy as hell.
Extremly low explosion qualitys, whatsoever about the robot walk cycle.

You need to work alot on the animation itself.
The point of the story made no sense.

Improve by spending more time on the animation, watching how you walk,
And redrawing alot.

Art was okay, not really great though, lack of shadows, colours, etc.

Try next time.

[Drifts vs FLFFLL]

Its was pretty cool.

However, i somewhat find it kind of '' no fighting '' style, its like they are running and jumping in a very fast speed, and hitting somewhere inbetween everything.

It was a bit too many '' tweened '' parts,
basically, it needs more fighting.
And can you at least try to take Stick animation a level higher?
Its allways the same lame 2D view of everything.

I am not complaining about the whole style of stick fighting,
but it looks so boring that it never basically ends,
its allways the same fight between two or three assholes running around.

[I'm a Creep]

Hmm..

Terrible animation.
Horrible art. Extremly undetailed. Needs lots of work.
Running animation was like wtf? Better check how legs work.
The zomibes were wierdly colored, trees were just bad, or was that trees?
Lots of work needs to be done, specifically on animation and art.
Music chooise was okay, but i recommend H.I.M.

Practice more.

[the way of my madness 1p]

LAG!

Look, um, i dont know, but i had low quality and yet it lagged pretty hard.
There was either yet to much filters or i dont know.
The drawings werent really good tbh, they could ev used more '' touching '' .
Animation, well, tweens (of course, but FBF works better on Madness) it looked kind of yet too '' beginner '' stage. How long have you been working with Flash?

The plot of the story, well, it was kind of confusing, because it didnt sync,
like, on one moment its there, and the next over there.
And i couldnt see anything cause it LAGGED so hard...

Improve following:
- Do not use objects with HEAVY FILTERING and DO NOT TWEEN a filtered object.
- Draw everything, light effects, shadows, details, particless, etc.
- Do not use too much tweens. Too much = LAG.

I cant give you a 10 because it does need improvement, and the movie lagged very much, which really is a shame.
So i'll give you a 6, and then, Try again.

I wish you good luck on future projects,
And heres some tip you can use:

1) Make up a good story, if Madness, use the old school; guy - kill guard - kill many - kill clown - end. Okay? Or make up your own.
2) Be aware of how you export the file, rewatch and redo it.
Too much lag = Bad. Filters = lag = bad. Result: Bad movie.
3) FBF (when its Madness) Concentrate on your animation.
Its the head point of Flash. Dont Tween. FBF (In my opinion)

Hulalaoo responds:

LAG ? I HAVE 0 LAG, BUT IN THE NEXT PART A WORK IN THE LOW FILTER, FOR MORE ANIMATION QUALITY, YES, THIS ANIMATION IS HEAVY, SORRY FOR YOU COMPUTER, YOU COMMENT IS A PUNCH IN MY BALLs

[Hans Jellyfish]

Now that is what i am talking about! XD

Sweet work, i just love the fish-ocean idea everywhere! XD
Jellyfish? Genius! Lol
'' I dont like keeping my office dry '' = L O L

I like how you masked the tentacles, Masking is pretty hard, so you'll get an
extra point for that.

Drawings werent the '' best '' so to say, but it was nice anyway.

10/10
5/5

[Weather Man]

Its was entertaining. Well done.

But,

The character animation was very small, and pretty much no animation at all,
Except for the mouth, eyes and eyebrowns.
Next time, try to focus more on the animation of the characters.
Try redrawing it more (imo, an animator is supossed to animate MORE then the rest)
The blood in the end was wierd, it was just some lines.
Improve it by adding smaller details, and more variations of blood.
The laughing scenes were just pictures. O_o uh?

Do not missunderstand me, this is criticism.
There by i will give you a 6.

But the movie itself was good.
Good luck.

[Fågelskrämman]

Oh, vad bra! Jag älskade det! Nice!

Asså, fan vad nice det där var! Jag råkar vara svensk NG member! xD
Det visade mycket känslor och animationen var rätt okej, och det var mest tweens.
Mycket bra. Jag är själv en animerare. Adda mig på msn, gå till min NG sida ^^,

[This was in swedish movie, so here's an translation to my review]

Pretty nice! I loved it! I happend to by a swedish NG member!
The movie showed alot of feelings and the animation was okay, since it was mostly tweens.
Anyway good job! And good luck! 9/10!

Daani responds:

Tack så mycket:) skönt å se lite svensk text på den här sidan för omväxlings skull!

:)

[Gears of Awesome]

Rofl

Haha, it was hilarious