PeAtrit's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fallout 3 Mel's Addiction]

Decent, but...

The jokes werent funny, and the voiceacting was pretty bad.
It was kind of a lame story too, didnt make any sense.

Animation wasnt the best,
Backgrounds needed work.

6/10
3/5

Work on your drawing skills.

I dont care if you mark this review as useless,
Its called criticism, and thats what i am giving.

Battosai810 responds:

The jokes were funny enough, voiceacting was fine as that's how these characters talk. Animation was fairly fluid, and the backgrounds had a lot of work put into them. This of course coming from a reviewer who animates stickfights with white backgrounds.
There's a difference between constructive criticism and just telling me that my work isn't good. If you gave some specifics and advice on how to improve what you pointed out, maybe this wouldn't be a useless review.

["trick or treat?"]

Pointless.

I am sorry, but this is not good.
Its is very random, it has no story, its way too short and i dont like the style.
And it doesnet deserve frontpage.

Sorry, you will have to put WAY more effort and work in this,
get higher votes.

1/10
0/5

TheBoogley responds:

you are.

[Just a collab part]

Good work

I like your blood, and the effects.
I didnt like the voices tho ;/

Work on your sounds, they were scrachy, export them as 160kbps, Best Quality,
Mp3.
Add more frames to your movements, they're too stiff.

Otherwise, pretty nice.

PS. Too bad you didnt make it to the collab, they could'ev made this
to extra or something!

Anyway keep it up, Z.

Zackie responds:

The voices were fine except the fact i need to get a proper microphone used for animating. Thanks though

[Final Fantasy Stick]

Final Fantasy sucks.

I really dislike Final Fantasy, and anything related to it...
But i must admit, this was pretty nice, with all the smashings
and super powers. It was pretty smooth, but sometimes, it was too stiff.
And the sticks head didn't look right. They were too flat.

The Comet was lazy done, and there was no explosion.
Dont rush things at all, it will only look bad. Do everything smooth and slowely.

7/10
4/5

Keep working on your movies, remember, DON'T GET LAZY.

Cya later!

P.

ssjbryando responds:

I had a time limit dude so that's why I rushed the ending really fast. also yes i know its stiff, I'm still working on that. and the heads are because of the vcam, I put it wrong meaning the heads became oval and bad =\

[Gears of Stickwars]

Meh..

The movements was choppy, the idea it self sucked, just leave Gears of War
alone. The art.. was bad, the guns was.. very bad drawn and the colors sucked.

The only good thing, was the Gears truck.

It was undetailed and just messy.
Don't rush something, finish it nice and slowely.

Drifts responds:

There was a due date, and i started my entry late because i had to wait to get accepted before choosing what game to immatate.

[The Legend Preview]

Well done

I am looking forward for the movie, the preview was nice.
Although some of the sounds could'ev been better.
The movements were pretty impressive and the style of the guns rocked.
The effects were good enough for my taste.

Well, i hope you finish this zackie ;D you did a great job!

9/10
5/5

Zackie responds:

:) THanks a bunch

[Project: Game Over Ep.2A]

...

Meh. Sprites.... Its not even your art in there, you basiclly traced a bitmap
in flash.
Make your own animation.
This kind of animation has been showed so many times,
its lost its value.

Although, i have to admit, the effects were cool, but the subjects and some of
the voices were completely wrong.
2/5
6/10

Dan-Dark responds:

I made all i want, I draw and sprite my animations because it's only a hobbie for me.

[A Stickman Adventure]

Cool

well, very good for your.. first?
Keep working on your drawings and movements, and you shall do very fine
in the animation world.
Also, try working on your sticks a little =)
Anyway, awesome 8 for your trying best

Cander1336 responds:

Thanks. I'll work on my sticks now when I got decent drawing program lol. I did what I could in paint. ;)

[Street]

Wow, pretty good

Pretty good for a first flash tbh, :D
I liked it. You have potential!

Keep practising.

Fif0j responds:

Yeah... ThankZ