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Very nice

Wow, awesome animation, original story and excellent voiceacting!

Good parts:
Animation 10/10 - I seriously loved the scene where the guy walks through the hall and the light passing his face, i would REALLY want you to teach me how to do that, because that is top quality animation!

Story 10/10 - Very funny and original, nothing i've heard or seen before! xD
You should DEFINATELY continue this and make a series!

Sounds/Conent: Very nice, cartoonish and what not!

Overall: Good job!

curtiSmith responds:

Thanks heaps, I'm glad you liked it. I'd like to see it become a series too :D

Hmm...

The story line itself is quite interesting but it seems to me that this is rather "simple" made then with actual effort. The animation could use work, more easing, aswell as more frames inbetween the moves. The fighting scenes were pretty decent, i'll give you that. But the animation lacks intensity, sort of speak!
Sounds are rather okay, i suppose they will have to do.
But what i am looking for here is a little more "serious" work!
More effort regarding the animation, the details and the actual story.

Good parts:

7/10 because:
- Interesting points taken up in storyline
- Animation style (Could use some touching)
- Music - The music is quite nice.

Bad parts:

- Work on the animation, more frames and the ease-in and ease-out
- Work on making the story and the action more intense

General:

I dont like this style to be honest, its too racist with the way the characters
act and speak and sound... Its my opinion, i mean no offense but this is too "focused". Animation style is not very impressive either, but the music itself is nice.

Well...

I must say, this is something beyond the regular spriteanimations, and not lower then the typical still-pictures-tweened....

This is ACTUALLY something good. Wow. I am impressed.
Only problem i have is the ART - it is not detailed enough, nor has enough shadows.
But if we look behind that, this is actually good.
Quick moves all the time, but i suppose thats the idea.
Animations were decent aswell but the sounds annoyed the hell out of me.
Its been used so many times, probably. Eitherway, good job!

2/10 because of criticism regarding:
Art details
Sounds
The speed on the animation (Not all of it)

8/10 because of positive criticism:
Awesome idea
Nice animation overall
Good angles and effects
Overall animation - good.

Keep it up.

This is spam?

This is spam, i am sorry.

The idea of a clock version of the song would be awesome,
But ... this is just rather dull and still. Sure, the song is nice but not the animation nor the point of the movie.

Sorry, you're not getting higer then this.

WinchesterLock responds:

propaganda :)

Awesome idea! xD

I loved it! Awesome! Just hilarious! xD

Although, you should add a replay button!

Nice job on the guns but the part where the zooming took place was laggy:
to fix that, make the background into a picture, then tween. it wont be as nice
but it wont lag. Nice job on the rocketlauncher as well!

All in all, nice!

Hyun responds:

When you make something like this, you can come back and review here, k? :)

And when I say 'make something like this' I mean not decompiling the swf and tracing scenes from the anim like you do on your other animations.

Actually... nevermind. Never review any of my animations again.

Um...

Its nicely drawn and so, but... its way too short to even be here. Its just not okay.
PLEASE try and make this longer or post it in the particular section of NG where you post short anims...

Amazing!

Its incredible how artistic this movie is! It not only shows Nature in its best way but also the circle of life! I am amazed. Wow, i could never have been able to gather something like this up into such a loop! Well done, sir!

But, the animation COULD be a little better.
As could the details! But, all in all, this was just awesome!
Fun and really simple!

9/10

5/5

Keep these coming!

Veinom responds:

Thank you. I dont know how the animation could be improved. It has more animation than most movies here and everything is constanlty changing for about 3 minutes. Even the backgrounds were animated so they couldnt have a lot of detail for most part. And I think that if some backgrounds had more detail than others they wouldnt fit much.

Well...

As allways, its nice, proper and just a bloody mess.
However, it seems like i have seen it a thousand times earlier before.

D:

7/10
2/5

Hmm

I will start with criticism:

The loading part killed me - way too long loading for a 2.2 MB file.
The stick shaking on his head aside asnt very well made, nor animated.
Work on your movements. Also, sticks are SO old, if your gonna animate sticks,
try doing it the professional way.

Good parts:
The animation style was a little wobbly. I cant say it was the best, but it sure as hell was quite catchy. I judge alot on animation, which is what the points of animating is, so this style is quite good. I like the fast movements.
There were some jumpy parts in the beginning but i suppose it was nothing.

Nice job!

...

I beg to differ you, Hans. Newgrounds is for ANIMATED FILMS not VIDEOTAPED NOR VIDEO EDITED. I find this quite ridiciolus because your attempt on making an alien movie fails pretty hard, considering the fact that you can ACTUALLY SEE that this is Earth, with all the trees and backgrounds. If you were to make this kind of movies; DO IT GOOD! This was just bad! What was animated, like 2 %? The texts in the beginning and the end. I Am sorry, but this does not qualify for the Daily 3rd Place.

If you want to make this kind of stuff look good, DO IT WITH SKILLS.
Create your own backgrounds, trees, characters - ALL of that is needed if you wish to make this kind of stuff succesive! Because this is just retarded.

Thank you.

P.

I have been animating in Adobe Flash for 10 years. I now specialize in animating polandball animations! Check it out! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z192mRdrryg&t=464s

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