I'll start by saying that the poetic part was interesting, nice to see some variation from all the pointless stick violence. Even if the actual animation itself is basically the opposite (Or, so it seems) from the message. The music was okay, it was too soft for such a rough and hard stick fight. I'd prefer that you'd use sound effects, it really touches everything up, and makes the animation more interesting. Also, lower the music, if such effects are used. The poetic part and the violent stick fight dont seem to add up, so make sure you keep at one side at a time. I can understand that the animation says "You gotta fight" but it doesnt make any sense, considering that its just 2 sticks fighting.
- I prefer more realistic, and more jumpy style. This looked too smooth, almost as if they "knew" what do do, it looked too soft and light. Violence needs to be harsh, cruel, shaky and jumpy, BUT realistic. So work on that.
Effects were nice, i suppose.
- It was okay, nothing particular,
- Like i said, add sound effects, and use violent music
OR dont add sound effects, keep the animation to the subject, (poetic part) and use fitting music (which you did, but the animation doesnt fit)
Hope that will do! You have potential, style and a very characteristic view on life! With these kind of thoughts, you will reach far! Unfortunately, reality doesnt really speak in such ways, and is cruel and unfair. But i suppose hope will do.
Thanks for the comment and crit I'll try to apply what you said to my next animation.In my eyes the fight is symbolic and is definitely not opposite sorry you couldn't see that .
Wow, i must say, this is fascinating! I cant believe how you got the animation so smooth! And i really enjoyed the sadness in the whole thing! Awesome, indeed!
Nothing negative really, except for the quality, i noticed its an AVI. file, but hey, cant complain, really. Because with that amount of material it would surely lag. Nice, non the less.
WHAT THE F****
What in the name of fuck?! that's the most random thing i've ever seen! Awesome humor though! I had a good laugh.
Since the main point is humor, i wont be very judging on it, but all animations can be improved.
Nice work, nice idea and i'd love to see more! I'll keep an eye out for these!
Best Fucking Game
This is absolutely the best flash game ever made on Newgrounds.
Animation - very good, smooth and pretty awesome.
Sounds - How the hell did you get so good voiceacting? Please, you have to share!
Graphics - Very nice, rather pixely, but understanding. Awesome shit!
I have nothing more to say, except for AWESOMENESS.
More games. Now. <3
Very artistic and interesting <3
Nice job. I must say, this is very artistic and emotional, sort of!
I like the dark and silent atmosphere you managed to create using the artstyle that you have. Very nice on that. The music aswell, it fits rather good actually!
I'd love to see more of this!
Art - 10/10
Animation 9/10 - Its good but it needs some polishing
Music - 10/10 - I wouldn't be able to put something better up, so by all means, this does just fine!
Seriously, your previous about the female form was pretty neat.
You should make a giant tutorial on how to make comic drawn things, that ought to be very nice.
Keep it up, and thanks for honouring Michael Turner. <3
R.I.P Michael Turner
Ps - please send me the song? ; )
lol which song though? all the songs used in the video are on the left by my icon, if those are the ones your talking about lol
This is seriously awesome! :D Nice job!
This looks pretty decent. Nice job.
However, it needs a little more shadow on certain areas,
For example, if thats the sun in the background, then the light should be on all right sides, while the shadow should be on the left side.
But, thats just the way i see it, even if made freehand, art is still art! :P
Nice, overall 8/10.
But the wolfs paw on the rock is too big. The claws are too long, fix that.
What rock............. -_-'
What program do you use to draw this?
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