Age/Gender: 17, Male
Location: Sweden
Job: Student
WELL HELLO THAR LADS! , My name is Peatrit, I am a 16 years old teenager who love to animate. I live in Sweden, and i am studying Graphics and Media class at the moment! I have been animating for about, more then a year, now. Check out my Profile MATE!
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Exp. Points: 70 / 100
Exp. Rank #: 282,608
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Flash Reviews: 56
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56 Reviews | 17 w/ Responses
I will start with criticism:
The loading part killed me - way too long loading for a 2.2 MB file.
The stick shaking on his head aside asnt very well made, nor animated.
Work on your movements. Also, sticks are SO old, if your gonna animate sticks,
try doing it the professional way.
Good parts:
The animation style was a little wobbly. I cant say it was the best, but it sure as hell was quite catchy. I judge alot on animation, which is what the points of animating is, so this style is quite good. I like the fast movements.
There were some jumpy parts in the beginning but i suppose it was nothing.
Nice job!
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I beg to differ you, Hans. Newgrounds is for ANIMATED FILMS not VIDEOTAPED NOR VIDEO EDITED. I find this quite ridiciolus because your attempt on making an alien movie fails pretty hard, considering the fact that you can ACTUALLY SEE that this is Earth, with all the trees and backgrounds. If you were to make this kind of movies; DO IT GOOD! This was just bad! What was animated, like 2 %? The texts in the beginning and the end. I Am sorry, but this does not qualify for the Daily 3rd Place.
If you want to make this kind of stuff look good, DO IT WITH SKILLS.
Create your own backgrounds, trees, characters - ALL of that is needed if you wish to make this kind of stuff succesive! Because this is just retarded.
Thank you.
P.
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I am seriously impressed by your patience, i would never manage myself to do this. It was nice, would'ev been a little more cooler if u drew more frames, but its ok, i suppose.
nice job. : D
xD
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Hmm.. what can i say?
First, i really like the backgrounds.
The buildings, the bar, the village and the airplane was nicely DRAWN.
However, the COLOURING itself looked extremly unprofessional.
The characters barely moved, which shows that this was not even animated...
It was small, odd moves - not really worthy to be called "animation" .
You cant get away with nice voices, it doesnt work.
Eitherway i can give you more, because i judge Animation, Art, Backgrounds, Story, Sounds - But specially ANIMATION.
Story was .... kind of ridiciolus.
And the shooting sounds were patethic - Could you not have gotten anything better? This animation lacks on many places.
Improve on these points, and you will recieve higher reviews.
Thank you!
P.
5/10
3/10
Author's Response:
I generally respond to criticism in a positive way and appreciate how most of the more critical reviews I've had for Steve 3 have been constructive and polite in tone. However, yours has managed to genuinely irritate me, so allow me to retort:
Your most recent cartoon is a visual abomination, done almost entirely in monochrome and being around 90% tweened, the other 10% comprising embarrassingly basic frame-by-frame. While you speak of my 'extremely unprofessional' colouring, you've barely used any yourself, despite the fact vibrant colour in certain scenes would have made an excellent contrast between the woman's past and her present. Yes, criticising your work purely because you've criticised mine is a cheap shot, but you come across like you're a master of animation when you can't even apply your criticisms to your own work.
Aside from this, I really cannot stand 'high and mighty' reviews, especially where you've said things like my cartoon is not worthy to be called animation, and that I should 'improve on these points, and you will receive higher reviews'. Oh thank you, master of the visual arts and Newgrounds extraordinaire! Before I had your excellent advice to guide me, I didn't realise that people responded well to improved animation!
Look, I appreciate that this cartoon is not perfect - I did in fact make a lengthy post on my website regarding my own criticisms of the episode, and have since been spending a lot of time reading Richard Williams' guides to animating and trying to learn loads of new techniques for future cartoons. However, there are ways to be critical that mean you don't come across like a hypocritical asshole - you use several throw-away insults when describing my animation and voice acting, essentially saying I can't do it and it doesn't work. Thanks, that's very constructive, and not remotely judgemental given the quality of your own work!
Improve on these points, and you will receive a positive response from me.
Thank you!
T.
1/10
1/10
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Allright, i cannot believe this even made it to the portal.
First, this idea has been made AT LEAST 1 million times. And i am saying that because i am unsure how many other millions there are.
Obvious stolen idea from Terkoiz, the sticks weren't even proper made, they looked more like a ball of mud thrown together.
Physics were off, sounds were bad and not synced properly.
Animation was bad, sound quality was bad.
Bad:
Animation seriously needs work aswell as sounds.
The idea, the point, and the way you made this "The Jumper"-style-looking-cool-figures-ar e-best was just patethic and lame.
Good:
Song choice.
This is one of the worst animations ever submitted.
Get your own style and idea, and stop ripping off other ideas.
Like i usually say..
"AND IF YOU NOW WOULD - DO IT GOOD!"
And dont show up here with blurred sticks and what ever the hell that was.
Thank you.
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I agree with Naked-ape. This is just stupid. This was no fun, and IS extremly easy to animate, considering the fact that the only thing you actually "worked" on was the actionscript on the play button and the 1-2 frames during the "attacks" .
I am dissapointed how animation has gone so low in NG, i find this ridiciolus..
But as a fellow Newgrounders, i shall judge this submission
Bad: Lame idea, Lame animation, Lame music, pointless story, NO story whatsoever, non-interesting.
Good: Nothing.
However, i shall give you 4 because of the thumbnail picture.
Till Next time, get real, will you?
And the same is about you Newgrounders.
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Good:
The song was quite nice
The idea of how false school can be, lol.
SOME of the animation was okay
Bad:
Animation could be A HELL OF ALOT BETTER
It was choppy, unfixed, physics kinda sucked, really. lol.
I am looking for high quality animation. This looks like the characters are moving 3 frames on each move. Which needs to be fuck-loads-of-higher.
And i seriously disliked how you took photos, and edited them, and used them in your animation - that is a copyright law on that.
you NEVER take a photo, wether its yours or not,
1) Photos SUCKS (simply, unless you edit them like hell in Photoshop and make them look awesome)
2) Its BORING - Draw your own stuff - it makes you better.
I am very requiring when it comes to this.
Hope it helps.
cya!
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HELL FUCKIN' YEAH MAN! XDDD THIS IS SOME AWESOME SHIT!
NICE WORK, AND GREAT PRGORAMING! : D
KEEP IT UP!
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This is bad. Horrible, really. How can be best of the day? Seriously, it sucks.
And when i say it sucks, i DO MEAN IT.
First of all, the lines in the movie are extremly "cheesy", the game itself is barely interesting and the only reason i am giving you a 1 is because of the actionscripting effort.
The graphics are OK, the animations are barely any good and the music SERIOUSLY sucks.
The story is pointless at its highest mark.
I am giving you 1/20
0/5
This does NOT deserve to be the best of the day.
I am sorry - but you will have to try again.
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Wow, awesome! Really great game! I love the art and the music! it syns perfectly and really fits the enviroment. : D
10/10! I have not got anything negative to say, really!
For those who understand art at its most beautiful form, this is it! : D
Thank you for making this game! Good luck with future games, mate!
/ Petrit / Petty.
P.S. Please send that song? : D
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